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我的被子(小红花投稿) by 玥玥 (6岁)

我的女儿-玥玥,6岁。下面是她今年二月写的一篇自由命题习作。原文是用英文写的(enclosed below), 我翻译后贴到这里与大家分享一下。谢谢!
我的被子(小红花投稿)
玥玥 (6岁)
 
你喜欢你自己的被子吗?我能给你讲讲我的被子吗?我的被子对我来说非常特殊, 因为我不高兴,生气或者感觉不太好的时候,一抱它,就会觉得舒服多了. 如果我哭的时候,我会把它抱的更紧, 然后我就会感觉好很多. 如果没有我的被子,我就不能睡的很好.我实在太喜欢它了,有时候我都想把它带到学校来.
 
周末的时候,我会多抱它一会儿. 我觉得它特别可爱,你可能不一定这么觉得,有的时候大人也不喜欢它. 有时它会告诉我一些事, 我也会和它说话. 大部分时间它都很安静, 但它能听见我叫它. 它讲话的声音很轻,而且是用一种特殊的语言, 只有我和我的家人能听懂. 它吃的东西与人和动物吃的不一样, 而且它也没有耳朵. 但是它能听到我说的话. 它没有耳朵怎么听呢? 因为它的身体里有一种特殊的东西可以帮它听到声音.
 
我最喜欢其中的一个被角. 去度假的时候没有它,我要花很长时间才能睡着. 它虽然已经有点儿破了, 可我还是觉得它很可爱. 我妈妈想让我把它扔掉,但是我不同意,因为它对我太特殊了.
 
My Quilt
Do you love your own quilt? Can I tell you about my quilt? My quilt is very special for me because when I feel bad, angry, low, or when I am unhappy, I hold her and then I feel comfortable. When I cry, I hold her very tight and that makes me feel better, too. If I don't have her, I can't go to sleep very well. I just love her so much and sometimes I even want to bring her to school.
On weekends, I would hold her a little longer.She is so cute for me but she might not be for you, and sometimes adults don't like her. From time to time, she tells me things, and I talk with her too. Most of the times, she is quiet. She can hear me when I call her. She talks very soft because she is talking in a different lanuage. Only I and my family know what she is talking about.She even eats differnt things than people and animals. She doesn't have ears either, but she can hear me. How can she hear without ears? She has something special in her body that helps her hear.
My favorite is one particular corner of the quilt. I always have a hard time falling asleep on vacations without her. I think she is still cute even though she is ripped a little. My mom wants me to throw her away but I say NO because she is too special for me.
 
 
 

 





周小哭 (2012-03-27 05:10:53)

玥玥的文章解释清楚了一个我一直不明白的问题：有的孩子会从一个物件中得到安全感，这类孩子脑子里是怎么想的？

玥玥才六岁，就能将如此丰富的内心世界表达出来，孩子的表达能力真是不错。请告诉玥玥，小哭阿姨谢谢她的文章－－不但给阿姨讲了一个生动的故事，让阿姨眼前呈现出一个可爱的小女孩，更是让阿姨明白了一个一直没有搞懂的道理。

dnwu (2012-03-27 13:26:23)

谢谢鼓励!一直喜欢你的文字.

海云 (2012-03-27 21:36:13)

玥玥妈妈，孩子的文章不长，你可以把英文放在后面，让大家一起读。谢谢你们。

dnwu (2012-03-28 04:09:12)

好主意! 加在后面了, 谢谢!

周小哭 (2012-03-28 04:38:07)

英文比译文更流畅，大概这就是原版一般总是更受欢迎的原因吧。

予微 (2012-04-12 23:20:05)

yes, very good writing!

天婴 (2012-06-15 16:07:57)

才六岁，就这么有感悟，天才呀。

鼓掌，加油！